Writing troubles
I've been having trouble writing recently. The big thing on my plate is Eyes, but the problem is that it's been the big thing on my plate for the past year, and I'm tired of it. I want to get it done, but I'm stuck. There are problems with the version I currently have, but I really need the opinions of other people in order to see those problems clearly, and I'm having trouble getting feedback. Does anyone out there feel like they can give it a look and give me some advice? I'm not just looking for someone to read it and say whether it's good or bad, mind. I'm looking for detailed comments delivered on a timely basis (a couple of weeks). Anyone feel like giving it a shot?
