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Saturday, March 29, 2008

Writing conference
I've decided to attend a writer's conference, specifically the "Festival of Faith and Writing" at Calvin College in April. If nothing else, it's a good chance to network, and as there will be publishers there looking for new authors, there is a chance I could find someone interested in one of my novels. To that end, I've been working on preparing both The Eyes of the Shadow and Fire and Water for this. I considered bringing paper manuscripts, but at 600 pages, it's probably a bit much to burden someone with. So I've been working on preparing a CD which both manuscripts and some introductory material on me. I don't know if anything will come of it, but it should be fun.

Monday, March 24, 2008

Now accepting submissions for Storyblogging Carnival LXXXVI
I'll be hosting the next Storyblogging Carnival, the eighty-sixth, here at Back of the Envelope. If you use your blog to share your fiction, then the Storyblogging Carnival is your opportunity. Here we host any and all forms of storytelling in blog format. If you're curious about what this looks like, have a look at some examples of previous storyblogging carnivals. This next carnival will be going up April 7th.

If you'd like to participate, please e-mail your story submissions to me at dscrank-at-alum-dot-mit-dot-edu (or post in my comments), including the following information:
  • Name of your blog
  • URL of your blog
  • Title of the story
  • URL for the blog entry where the story is posted
  • (OPTIONAL) Author's name
  • (OPTIONAL) A suggested rating for adult content (G, PG, PG-13, R)
  • A word count
  • A short blurb describing the story

The post may be of any age, from a week old to years old. The submission deadline is 11:59 PM Eastern time on Saturday, April 5th. More detailed information follows (same as always):
  1. The story or excerpt submitted must be posted on-line as a blog entry, and while fiction is preferred, non-fiction storytelling is acceptable.
  2. The story can be any length, but the Carnival will list them in order of length, from shortest to longest, and include a word count for each one.
  3. You may either send a complete story, a story in progress, or a lengthy excerpt. You should indicate the word count for both the excerpt and the complete story in the submission, and you should say how the reader can find more of the story in the post itself.
  4. If the story spans multiple posts, each post should contain a link to the beginning of the story, and a link to the next post. You may submit the whole story, the first post, or, if you've previously submitted earlier posts to the Carnival, the next post which you have not submitted. Please indicate the length of the entire story, as well as the portion which you are submitting.
  5. The host has sole discretion to decide whether the story will be included or not, or whether to indicate that the story has pornographic or graphically violent content. The ratings for the story will be decided by the host. I expect I'll be pretty lenient on that sort of thing, but I have some limits, and others may draw the line elsewhere. Aside from noting potentially offensive content, while I may say nice things about stories I like, I won't be panning anyone's work. I expect other hosts to be similarly polite.
  6. The story may be the blogger's own or posted with permission, but if it is not his own work he should gain permission from the author before submitting to the Carnival.

If you'd like to be added to the e-mail list, please let me know. Finally, I appreciate folks promoting the carnival on their own blogs, and I'm always looking for bloggers willing to host future carnivals.

Sunday, March 23, 2008

The Harmony of the Gospels, Part II
This is a continuation of the previous post on the Harmony of the Gospels, specifically as it refers to the resurrection. There I quoted from all the gospels, here I talk about the differences.

You'll note that there are differences between the gospel accounts. In my younger days, this troubled me a lot. I've had twenty years now to think on this, but while I won't claim to have fully figured it out (although I do have some thoughts I'll share in a moment), I have learned that the weight of the evidence is convincing, even if my belief in the Gospels' inerrancy remains troubled. Before I discuss some possible interpretations, it's fair to ask whether it's worth the effort. Lee Strobel in The Case for Christ rightly points out that there is enough agreement that the essential story is clear, and enough differences to indicate that the four accounts came from different sources. C.S. Lewis in Miracles (Chapter 16) points out that there's more to the Resurrection than the first morning:
When modern writers talk about the Resurrection they usually mean one particular moment--the discovery of the Empty Tomb and the appearance of Jesus a few yards away from it. The story of that moment is what Christian apologists now chiefly try to support and sceptics chiefly try to impugn. But this almost exclusive concentration on the first five minutes or so of the Resurrection would have astonished the earliest Christian teachers. In claiming to have seen the Resurrection they were not necessarily claiming to have seen that. Some of them had, some of them had not. It had no more importance than any of the other appearances of the risen Jesus--apart from the poetic and dramatic importance which the beginnings of things must always have. What they were claiming was that they had all, at one time or another, met Jesus during the six or seven weeks that had followed His death. Sometimes they seem to have been alone when they did so, but on one occasion twelve of them saw Him together [by twelve here C.S. Lewis (and Paul) means the Twelve, who in fact were only eleven by that point], and on another occasion about five hundred of them. St. Paul says that the majority of the five hundred were still alive when he wrote the First Letter to the Corinthians, i.e. about 55 A.D.

The "Resurrection" to which they bore witness was, in fact, not the action of rising from the dead but the state of being risen; a state, as they held, attested by intermittent meetings during a limited period (except for the special, and in some ways different, meeting vouchsafed to St. Paul).

The actual events of Resurrection Sunday are, for the most part, skimmed over very briefly in the first three gospels. Why? One reason is pointed out by C.S. Lewis--those events were actually a very minor part of the Resurrection story. The apostles themselves didn't see any of it, and the story told by the women didn't convince them. Women, after all, were not considered reliable witnesses in first century Judea, which may be another reason that their involvement wasn't dwelt upon. There are a few other points to keep in mind, which have more to do with the nature of ancient histories and biographies than the gospels themselves. The first is that chronology was never considered terribly important in ancient histories: the point is to tell the events, not necessarily to get them in an exact order. The second is that quotes are not full quotes. Go ahead and read the Sermon on the Mount (Matthew 5-7). I doubt it will take you more than fifteen minutes. Yet Jesus usually taught for hours on end. None of the sermons we have are full transcripts; they are all highly abridged, and that likely applies to all quotes found in ancient writings. Some commentators argue that all the quotes are paraphrased; they are at the least translations, as Greek, the language in which the gospels were written, was not the spoken language of Judea at this time. There are some scholars who believe that no quotation used by ancient writers is even meant to be exact, simply what the writers think the speaker should have said. I don't subscribe to that theory myself. The third and final point is that when listing people present, writers usually just listed the important people, leaving an assumed "and others." If you want more on the nature of ancient histories and the reliability of the gospels, I recommend F.F. Bruce's The New Testament Documents: Are They Reliable?

Since John is the most clearly different, and the most detailed of the accounts, we'll start with his gospel account and build on that. Clearly, John was telling the story of Mary Magdalene, so the focus is on her, and the other women aren't even mentioned. According to Luke, there were at least five of them there: he lists three, and then says there were other women (plural). Of these, four are named in the Gospels: Mary Magdalene, Mary the mother of James, Salome, and Joanna (I suppose it's possible that Salome and Joanna are two names for the same woman--I don't really know). The exact time is around dawn. John says that it was still dark, Mark says that it was "when the sun had risen." I'll admit that this bothered me at one point, but I don't remember why. It can be pretty dark just as the sun is rising, and I imagine the episode--travelling to the tomb, arriving, witnessing, then leaving--took long enough that it was dark when it began and light when it was over. In any case, Mary Magdalene arrives, sees the tomb is empty, then runs to get Peter and the other disciple (John, who carefully avoided naming himself throughout the gospel). There's no account of angels or Jesus yet in John. Of course, there's no mention of the other women either, and I wonder what they were doing. Did they go with Mary, or did they remain there? One possibility, which is one I've never heard mentioned in any commentary I've read, is that they split up. When they found the tomb empty, Mary went back to find Peter and John--perhaps alone, perhaps with some of the others--while the others remained there. There they saw the angels. This, then, could be the main source of the discrepancy between the gospels. If the other women remained while Mary went to get Peter, then perhaps there are two encounters with the angels, one by these women and one by Mary Magdalene, and perhaps, although I'm less certain of this, two encounters with Jesus. Jesus and the angels were, after all, in the area. Jesus would be meeting with lots of people that day, including some of his disciples on the road to Emmaus (Luke 24:12-32), and the apostles that evening (Luke 24:33-49). 1 Corinthians 15:5 tells us that he met with Peter before the apostles, although we're not told exactly when (he may have been one of the disciples on the road to Emmaus).

This resolves most of the difficulties involved, except for a couple of details. First off, how many angels were there? At least two. There could have been a whole choir involved in this event (I imagine there wasn't any lack of volunteers). All the accounts except Matthew's mention two, but Matthew's is the only one which has an angel doing more than talking to the women. After doing all the hard work of subduing the guards and moving the stone, before the women arrived it appears, this angel gets top billing in doing the actual speaking. Where were the angels? While Matthew's active angel was sitting on the stone at one point, there's no reason to assume he was still there when the women arrived. Who reported to the disciples? All of the women, apparently, but it seems that it was Mary's report, when there were still very few facts, that got Peter to go and look, as recorded in Luke and John.

This is clearly not the only possible explanation for the differences, and I make no claim that it is the correct explanation. It's simply the one that makes the most sense to me, but I've been convinced that the weight of evidence is such that the exact details are less important than I once thought.
The Harmony of the Gospels, Part I
I've posted these two posts on Easter Sunday before, but I haven't done it for the last year or two. I thought I'd start it up again, as I think they're good Easter posts.

From Matthew:
Now after the Sabbath, as it began to dawn toward the first day of the week, Mary Magdalene and the other Mary came to look at the grave. And behold, a severe earthquake had occurred, for an angel of the Lord descended from heaven and came and rolled away the stone and sat upon it. And his appearance was like lightning, and his clothing as white as snow. The guards shook for fear of him and became like dead men. The angel said to the women, "Do not be afraid; for I know that you are looking for Jesus who has been crucified. He is not here, for He has risen, just as He said. Come, see the place where He was lying. Go quickly and tell His disciples that He has risen from the dead; and behold, He is going ahead of you into Galilee, there you will see Him; behold, I have told you."

And they left the tomb quickly with fear and great joy and ran to report it to His disciples. And behold, Jesus met them and greeted them. And they came up and took hold of His feet and worshiped Him. Then Jesus said to them, "Do not be afraid; go and take word to My brethren to leave for Galilee, and there they will see Me."

(Matthew 28:1-10)

From Mark:
When the Sabbath was over, Mary Magdalene, and Mary the mother of James, and Salome, bought spices, so that they might come and anoint Him. Very early on the first day of the week, they came to the tomb when the sun had risen. They were saying to one another, "Who will roll away the stone for us from the entrance of the tomb?" Looking up, they saw that the stone had been rolled away, although it was extremely large. Entering the tomb, they saw a young man sitting at the right, wearing a white robe; and they were amazed. And he said to them, "Do not be amazed; you are looking for Jesus the Nazarene, who has been crucified. He has risen; He is not here; behold, here is the place where they laid Him. But go, tell His disciples and Peter, 'He is going ahead of you to Galilee; there you will see Him, just as He told you.' " They went out and fled from the tomb, for trembling and astonishment had gripped them; and they said nothing to anyone, for they were afraid.

(Mark 16:1-8)

From Luke:
But on the first day of the week, at early dawn, they came to the tomb bringing the spices which they had prepared. And they found the stone rolled away from the tomb, but when they entered, they did not find the body of the Lord Jesus. While they were perplexed about this, behold, two men suddenly stood near them in dazzling clothing; and as the women were terrified and bowed their faces to the ground, the men said to them, "Why do you seek the living One among the dead? He is not here, but He has risen. Remember how He spoke to you while He was still in Galilee, saying that the Son of Man must be delivered into the hands of sinful men, and be crucified, and the third day rise again."

And they remembered His words, and returned from the tomb and reported all these things to the eleven and to all the rest. Now they were Mary Magdalene and Joanna and Mary the mother of James; also the other women with them were telling these things to the apostles. But these words appeared to them as nonsense, and they would not believe them. But Peter got up and ran to the tomb; stooping and looking in, he saw the linen wrappings only; and he went away to his home, marveling at what had happened.

(Luke 24:1-12)

From John:
Now on the first day of the week Mary Magdalene came early to the tomb, while it was still dark, and saw the stone already taken away from the tomb. So she ran and came to Simon Peter and to the other disciple whom Jesus loved, and said to them, "They have taken away the Lord out of the tomb, and we do not know where they have laid Him." So Peter and the other disciple went forth, and they were going to the tomb. The two were running together; and the other disciple ran ahead faster than Peter and came to the tomb first; and stooping and looking in, he saw the linen wrappings lying there; but he did not go in. And so Simon Peter also came, following him, and entered the tomb; and he saw the linen wrappings lying there, and the face-cloth which had been on His head, not lying with the linen wrappings, but rolled up in a place by itself. So the other disciple who had first come to the tomb then also entered, and he saw and believed. For as yet they did not understand the Scripture, that He must rise again from the dead. So the disciples went away again to their own homes.

But Mary was standing outside the tomb weeping; and so, as she wept, she stooped and looked into the tomb; and she saw two angels in white sitting, one at the head and one at the feet, where the body of Jesus had been lying. And they said to her, "Woman, why are you weeping?" She said to them, "Because they have taken away my Lord, and I do not know where they have laid Him."

When she had said this, she turned around and saw Jesus standing there, and did not know that it was Jesus. Jesus said to her, "Woman, why are you weeping? Whom are you seeking?" Supposing Him to be the gardener, she said to Him, "Sir, if you have carried Him away, tell me where you have laid Him, and I will take Him away." Jesus said to her, "Mary!" She turned and said to Him in Hebrew, "Rabboni!" (which means, Teacher). Jesus said to her, "Stop clinging to Me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father; but go to My brethren and say to them, 'I ascend to My Father and your Father, and My God and your God.' "

Mary Magdalene came, announcing to the disciples, "I have seen the Lord," and that He had said these things to her.

(John 20:1-18)

More later.

Saturday, March 22, 2008

Review of Howl's Moving Castle
I caught Howl's Moving Castle for the first time on Cartoon Network last Sunday, and greatly enjoyed it. This is hardly surprising, as it's a Studio Ghibli film, and their work is always astounding. Studio Ghibli is a Japanese animation studio responsible for such classics as Spirited Away and Princess Mononoke. I enjoy all their movies. If you're not familiar with the story of Howl's Moving Castle, it concerns a teenaged hatmaker named Sophie who runs afoul of the Witch of the Waste, who turns her into a crone. She runs away from home and takes shelter inside Howl's moving castle. The Wizard Howl has a nasty reputation of capturing pretty girls so he can eat their hearts and/or steal their souls, although it turns out that's just a rumor. In truth he's a vain and irresponsible young man who is nevertheless remarkably kind to the cursed girl, who takes up a position as the cleaning lady for him, his fire demon, Calcifer, and his young apprentice, Markl. Since Sophie is, in truth, an attractive young girl under a curse, and Howl really is a handsome young man, you can probably see where this is going.

Okay, so that part was a tad predictable, but it was still a great movie. Since it's Studio Ghibli, it was of course beautiful. Great animation, from the oily shadow creatures to the falling stars to the walking castle. The action scenes were big and busy without beng confusing. The voices were well done, although I thought Sophie's old lady voice was less stiff than her young girl one, and Howl occasionally sounded sedated. Billy Crystal did the best job, as you'd expect from an old pro. His Calcifer had the funniest lines, and the delivery to match. The love story, though a tad predictable, didn't feel contrived, and the sense of drama was quite powerful.

The one thing I had trouble with is what I usually do with a Studio Ghibli film (as I mentioned in my remarks on Spirited Away). I came away rather confused on a number of points. Granted, their stories involve magic, and magic doesn't always make sense, but someone familiar with fantasy can usually figure out the internal logic of a fantasy world, since fantasy writers usually have a pretty good idea how such things work and usually like to make those things clear by the end. In a movie, there's not always as much explanation, but still, most don't have you walking away, scratching your head and wodering what happened. Or at least I don't usually like that kind.

I enjoyed this one anyway, but there are a few things that bothered me (spoilers hidden below):


With this many questions, I couldn't leave it alone. So I bought the book. Howl's Moving Castle is adapted from a book of the same name by Diana Wynne Jones. I just finished the book the other night, and I very much enjoyed it. To be honest, I think the movie is better, but that may just be because I saw the movie first. The book was still very good, and in many ways less confusing. But it was also very, very different. More spoilers as I try to explain below.


So, if you've read all that, you may be wondering why I prefer the movie if the book made more sense. Well, there are a couple of things. In the book, the moving castle is just a front--no one actually lives in it, whereas in the movie, that's where they live. This has a tremendous appeal, not just visually, although that is a part of it, such as when Sophie goes out on the balcony and watches the land go by. And while I found Sophie reverting to young age and back confusing, I thought it offered a great deal of dramatic tension. But at the bottom, I think a lot of it comes of seeing the movie before reading the book. They're both very good, and I recommend them highly.

Monday, March 17, 2008

New book from Mr. Dodge
Andrew Ian Dodge, a regular contributor to the Storyblogging Carnival, has a new book out. Available on Amazon, The Gathering Dark and other tales: A Sage of Wales Collection, has more of Andrew's Sage of Wales stories, which he's frequently graced us with. Here's the blurb:
The Sage of Wales' adventures continue in this exciting new collection by Andrew Ian Dodge .

In a short novel, The Sage must help his friend, Reginald Wiggenbottom, discover strength out of legend in order to save his unborn son from a nasty conspiracy .

Followed by three additional short tales . First, the Sage must help a man come to grips with a dangerous family legacy.

In the second, he must stop an overly detailed writer from accidentally freeing the Elder God, Cthulhu, from his watery cave and so bringing about the end of mankind.

And finally, he must devise a way to keep an evil offshoot of Islam from raising a bloodthirsty pharaoh.

Congratulations to Andrew, and I encourage you to support him by buying his book.

Wednesday, March 12, 2008

Why I believe in God: The Old Covenant and the New
On a superficial level, Judaism looks a lot like other ancient tribal religions. Why would the real God, someone wholly different from the tribal gods which so many cultures created for themselves, deign to interact with humans in that way? Unless, perhaps, it was to make a point. We spend a lot of time demanding that God deal with us on our terms. We ask questions like, "Why doesn't he just reveal himself to us directly, with clear and undeniable revelation? Set up our government, and tell us exactly what he wants us to do? Give us clear rules and judges to rule over us? Provide for us and destroy our enemies?" We ignore the fact that the story of Israel is the history of him doing exactly that. He chooses Abraham, makes him into a tribe to compete with all the others, and promises him that he will prove that he's greater than all those other gods. Then, in the time of Moses he calls the Israelites from bondage, demonstrates his power through plagues and the parting of the Red Sea, gives clear instructions as to what he wants, physically dwells with the Israelites in the form of cloud and fire. And the Israelites reject him anyway. They complain and whine, they're fickle and hard-headed. Despite all they've seen, they don't trust that he'll fulfill his promises: on the threshold of the Promised Land they turn away, fearful that they can't beat the Canaanites living there, even though God has already demonstrated his ability to defeat the far more powerful Egyptians. God doesn't give up, though. He gives them chance after chance, as a tribe, as a nation, as a kingdom, as two kingdoms. He gives them prosperity and hardship, judge and prophet, king and priest, making sure they have every opportunity to see that he's faithful, that he's good. And time after time, we see that this sort of relationship doesn't work. Obedience predicated on punishment, the type which the ancient world so indoctrinated, had a hard enough time getting strict obedience: it could not draw out love. Belief based on proof is not the same thing as faith, and will soon find excuses to revert to disbelief anyway. The story of Israel isn't the story of one nation's rejection of God, but rather a demonstration of all humanity in a microcosm.

And that's where the new covenant comes into play. When God called on Abraham to sacrifice Isaac, he was doing more than testing Abraham's faith. He was teaching something as well. Love is demonstrated through sacrifice. And for Abraham to sacrifice not just his firstborn son, but his only son, the long awaited fulfillment of God's promise miraculously given to him and Sarah in their old age, was an amazing act of love and faith in God. But why demand it at all, even if it was turned away at the end? Wasn't it cruel? It was hard, but it was a lesson. At the foundation of the Jewish religion is the story of the painful sacrifice of the son averted. At the foundation of Christianity is the story of the painful sacrifice of the son carried out, not as a sacrifice to God, but as a sacrifice by God for us. I won't attempt a full explication of the Crucifixion here, except to note that the son went willingly, every bit as committed to saving humanity as the Father. This sacrifice changed the covenant between God and Man. No longer was God demonstrating his power and asking for our obedience; instead, he was demonstrating his love and asking for our love in return.

Sunday, March 9, 2008

Obama on Homosexuality
I hadn't even heard about this one, but Parableman does an excellent job of both explaining the issue and dissecting Obama's argument.
A lot of people are discussing Barack Obama's recent off-the-cuff remarks about the Bible and same-sex civil unions. I want to delve a little bit into the contrast he draws between the Sermon on the Mount and Romans 1. The gist of his statement is (1) the Sermon on the Mount is more central to Christian faith than an "obscure" passage in Romans, and (2) the Sermon on the Mount should influence our attitudes toward civil unions in some positive way.

Generally arguing about how the Bible should be interpreted is the wrong way to win people who believe the Bible to your side. This is not because the Bible-believers are not open to multiple interpretations, but rather because, after 2000 years, there are very few new interpretations. The argument that the Sermon on the Mount is more important than Paul's letters is one I've heard before, especially when the argument is that the most central part, the lens through which the entire Bible should be read, is through the two greatest commandments, loving God and loving your neighbor. This then, especially the loving your neighbor commandment, is seen as justification for letting your neighbor do whatever he wants. Oddly, the loving God part gets left by the wayside, ignoring the fact that it means listening to his word and obeying it, not tossing it out as if loving God is merely having positive feelings towards him. Even though I agree that all commandments should be interpreted in light of the two greatest, it's still not a convincing argument, as love has always required correction.

Thursday, March 6, 2008

Storyblogging Carnival is up
This is late. The carnival itself was a bit late due to an unfortunate mishap, but I still should have linked to it sooner. Anyway, here it is. Kai did an excellent job.

Saturday, March 1, 2008

Something Inside
I decided to write something short for the Storyblogging Carnival. This is what I came up with. Sometimes I worry about myself.


I’ve told this story so many times, that you’d think I’d have it memorized. To the EMTs, to the police, to the lawyer, to the judge, to the shrinks. Over and over again, and each time it’s just as new and different as it was before. It never comes out the same way twice, never makes sense. The other lawyer said it was proof that I was lying, although the shrinks say it’s proof that I’m suffering from some sort of trauma. Well, maybe. It was traumatic, all right, but that doesn’t make it any less real. The reason my story doesn’t make sense is that the events didn’t make sense, and every time they ask me questions which are supposed to make it make sense, it comes out different. And the only thing that is the same each time is that Chuck is dead and the thing that killed him left something inside of me. Something. I don’t know what it is, just that the thing touched my chest and I could feel that something climbing into me. I still feel it. The doctors tell me that there’s nothing there, but they’re wrong. Not only is it there, but it’s moving. It’s alive. They won’t let me have anything sharp anymore, but I can’t get to it with my fingernails. I just have a raw and bloody patch in the middle of my chest. The shrinks have been trying to convince me that I killed Chuck, and that the thing I saw is just my imagination. Or a “manifestation of the violence inside me.” I’d much rather just be a murderer than have to live with this thing inside of me. Well, I won’t have to worry about that for much longer. The thing inside has started to migrate towards my head. I think that once it gets there, I won’t be worried about anything at all.


This has been a 318 word story.