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Wednesday, August 31, 2005

Katrina
As some of you may know, I have family in Louisiana. Thus it caused some concern to hear that Hurricane Katrina has flooded 80% of New Orleans. Now my family doesn't live in New Orleans. They live in St. Francisville, a small town about 30 miles north of Baton Rouge. And if you search the news stories on Katrina, St. Francisville comes up as the place where people have found refuge after fleeing the hurricane. Still, attempts to call home were thwarted yesterday due to the overloading of the phone circuits, and I was frustrated at not being able to get through.

I finally did talk to my sister, and everyone's all right. My parents were west of the storm, near Texas, for a vacation, while my sisters hunkered down with their friends in my parents' home, which is sturdier than theirs. One of my sisters is still without electricity, but my parents' house only lost it for an hour or so.

Please keep them, and everyone else in the path of Katrina, in your prayers. Many weren't so lucky. Loss of life is over a 100 (I expect it will be several hundred by the time we're done counting), and hundreds of thousands of people are homeless.

Tuesday, August 30, 2005

Stereotypes
Dean Esmay has some interesting thoughts on conservative and liberal stereotypes:
[B]oth of America's major parties have caricatures of each other. The primary rap against Republicans for any number of years has been that they are stupid, and the primary rap against Democrats has been that they are weak and ineffectual. Conservatives and liberals (who aren't the same as Republicans and Democrats, but there's a lot of overlap) map to roughly similar cartoonishness: Conservatives are authoritarian, nasty, and rather stupid, and liberals are wishy-washy pansies with their heads in the clouds.

How and why we got here is a fascinating question, but let's posit this: there's a kernal of truth to most stereotypes, otherwise, they wouldn't be stereotypes. As it happens, many American white guys do look funny dancing, fancy spinning tire rims are quite popular among young black men, and there really are an awful lot of "Asians" in the nation's math departments. I've known a few accountants and lawyers in my day, and by golly, an awful lot of them do seem to be Jewish!

I've heard, although I'm not going to look it up at the moment, that people with bachelor's degrees tend to be Republicans, while both those without a college education and those with advanced degrees tend to be Democrats. There's something to be said for Dean's suggestion that those with Republican tendencies pursue degrees for a purpose, in order to join the workforce, while those with Democratic leanings are more interested in academia itself. I myself have a Ph.D., but I have very little interest in academia. I knew I wanted to do R&D, and I knew that a Ph.D. would help me to do that. Thus I followed Republican principles to get a "Democratic" degree.
Storyblogging Carnival XXVI is online!
The latest Storyblogging Carnival is up at Curtis Schweitzer's a-sdf. He's posted it on both his blogs, so you can also find it at Working Titles. We have a good showing with thirteen stories this week.

The next carnival is the twenty-seventh, making it our first anniversary. I would like to get as many entries as possible for this, so please consider submitting even if you haven't done so in a while. And if you don't have a story yourself, please use your blog to let other people know about this upcoming carnival.

Monday, August 29, 2005

Mauritania update
So, what's new in Mauritania recently? Here's what a search of the news shows:
  • The President of the African Union has some tough words for the military junta, asking it to abolish slavery and help fight terrorism. It's good to hear that the African Union isn't quite as uncritical of the junta as earlier articles suggested.

  • The junta has banned its members from running for elections. It had said they wouldn't run, but this step does seem to indicate that they're serious about that. We'll see whether this holds until the elections.

  • A pro-democracy group, Democrats without Borders, has called for the return of President Taya, with a number of conditions:
    It suggested that upon resuming duties, Ould Taya should step down as chairman of his party, promise to no longer lead, support or be a member of any political party, and appoint a transitional government with a Prime Minister who is not a member of any political party.

    Chaired by Ahmed Ould Saleck, DWB maintained that its proposals were based on the "universally accepted principle that putsches [coups] can in no way, whatever the motives, be a means to access and devolve power."

    They seem sincere enough, if a bit naive believing that it's possible to let Taya back into power. No one's suggesting we return Saddam to power with promises that he step down in a few years.

  • And the junta has succeeded in winning more people to supporting the transition, including the OIF (the International Francophone Organization) and the RDU (the Rally for Unity and Democracy), both organizations whose Acronyms get all scrambled in translation.

  • I guess it shouldn't come as a surprise that the junta is expanding oil exploration. It's too soon to tell what to make of it.

  • Qatar, which you will remember offered asylum to Mauritania's ex-President Taya, is praising the military junta as well. Hmm, whose side are they on?

And that's all for today. I'll report more next week.
Is God politically correct?
I mentioned the other day that Jeff Darlington has a blog where he discusses, among other things, theology. He doesn't post often, but when he does, he has some serious thoughts to share, such as this:
While this is a wonderful little lesson in and of itself (and ties in very nicely with my recent "Providence" story in GPF), it suddenly occurred to me exactly why I loathe the term "politically correct" so much. I've had many people argue with me that political correctness is a good thing, and that even Christians, when they apply the principles I mentioned above, uplift the practice. But thanks to this lesson, I can now put into words what that distinction really is.

You see, political correctness is just what its name implies: the "correct" way of doing things given the current political climate. It's enforced by society, by those who don't wish to step on toes and inadvertently offend someone. If you are not politically correct, you are branded as an insensitive bigot; it is reinforced by shame and the fear of becoming a social pariah. Respect is required, not earned, but at the same time may only be skin deep.

To me, there's a strong separation between God's (and by token, a Christian's) impartial love for mankind and a mandate from some group such as the NAACP or ACLU to restrict what someone says. God is the ultimate example of impartiality. God cannot tolerate sin, yet mankind is inherently sinful (a fact that is directly contrary toward contemporary thinking). Thus, mankind has been condemned because of its sinfulness, but God, in His impartial love for all mankind--a deep, heartfelt love, not convenient lip-service--sent Christ to be the ultimate sacrifice to give us a way to escape this condemnation. (See John 3:16-18.)

Of course, I know a lot of my non-Christian readers out there wouldn't agree with this logic, but that's the way I see it. (For that, I take solace in I Corinthians 1:26-29.) I still can't stand the term "political correctness," nor the stigma (in my mind) that it implies. But you know, while God isn't very "politically correct," He sure is better at it than anyone else on earth is.

For all their talk about tolerance, the politically correct crowd is remarkably intolerant. In their mindset, it doesn't matter whether you're black or white, whether you're male or female or neither, or whether you're heterosexual, homosexual, or bisexual, as long as you think the right way. It has remarkably little tolerance for people who disagree with their ideology, and God help you if you're a member of a politically correct minority group who happens to hold politically incorrect ideas. Then they feel quite free to engage in racist rhetoric.

The problem with being politically correct isn't just that it's an enforced way of speaking with no effort to change attitudes--they honestly believe that if people can only say nice things, eventually they'll only think nice things--but that what it's enforcing is all wrong. It promotes uncritical acceptance of different people groups by downplaying differences between them, going so far as to ignore, suppress, and ridicule any evidence that there might indeed be such differences. It promises diversity except in the one way that really matters: the diversity of ideas. Oh, it allows for different religions and philosophies, as long as they are all accepted as equally valid and none of them conflict with the tenets of political correctness itself. But to actually acknowledge real differences between groups, differences of culture and beliefs which might require sorting between right and wrong, is beyond the pale.

What the Christian is called to do is quite different. We are called to love everyone--not to tolerate them, not to be uncritically accepting of them, not to live and let live. Loving people is tough, hard work. To love someone you have to get to know them, to know their good and their bad points, the qualities which you find charming and those which you find annoying. To admit that they have flaws and that you have to love them in spite of them. But also to encourage and correct them, to help them overcome those flaws. And to accept correction when it's directed at you, for you too have flaws that need correction, and often the difficulties you have accepting certain qualities say more about you than about them. The politically correct crowd refuses to criticize any member in good standing. You can say racist and sexist and downright insulting things about others, as long as they're outside the protected groups. It refuses to look at those they accept closely enough to see those flaws which need correction, to deal with the real conflicts between them, and until it does, it can never love them.

Sunday, August 28, 2005

Yet another webcartoonist with a blog
Okay, I just noticed this, but Jeff Darlington, the webcartoonist behind GPF, has had a blog since February. And unlike Maritza Campos and Howard Tayler, who both use Livejournal, Jeff uses Movable Type, also known as real blogging software. (Okay, that's not fair, as I've never used either, and although they're better known as webcartoonists than bloggers, I'm certain that Maritza and Howard get more blog traffic than quite a few well-known bloggers. Certainly more than me.) Anyway, Jeff wants to use his blog for actual content, including a couple of essays on Christianity. See, I told you he was a Christian.

Saturday, August 27, 2005

Weekly Webcomic Update
It's on time for once!

Sluggy Freelance — Torg was acting his usual goofy self until he ran into Zoe. Now Gwynn has a plan to test whether Zoe really is the reason for his depression (she is, in a way, what with the death of Alt-Zoe and Torg's ambivalence over what their relationship really meant). However, Torg disappears with Kiki before we get any definitive results, and a mysterious package arrives for Torg. And just as we expect to shift to Oceans Unmoving, we get a Torg Potter storyline! Now I'm not a big fan of the Torg Potter, but I like Torg better than Bun-bun, so I see this as a mostly positive development. And this time Kiki's along for the ride as Torg's familiar. Well, better her than Bun-bun, but I would have liked to have seen Aylee as a familiar.

Day by Day — For the most part, it's the MSM that gets the full extent of this week's mockery, but there's enough left over for the middle-aged and some really goofy ideas: like reintroducing predators to the Great Plains.

Scary Go Round — Fallon gets killed. Again! And Shelley is not at all happy that Tim, Ryan, and Hugo killed her zombie clone thinking it was her. She's moving to Oldburne with Amy.

College Roomies from Hell!!! — Dave's spirit is willing but his flesh is weak. It's hard to look away from a naked Margaret, but why is she crying? When he finally manages to get inside without being caught for peeping, she attempts to evade his questions about her tears by dropping the towel anyway. There's actually a chance that it won't work, considering Dave didn't brainwarp quite as badly as usual when he saw her through the window. Ah, who are we kidding? It's Dave! Meanwhile, Mike agrees to spend Spring Break with his Dad if his "boyfriend," meaning Dave, and his pervert friends, meaning the rest of the Roomies, can come too. Dave's not going to be happy about having to pretend to be Mike's gay lover, but Mike'll probably give him the choice of that or repaying him for the phone Dave threw out the window. And finally, it looks like Steve and Waldo survived the jump to escape Lily, whom they thought was Roger cross-dressing. When they decide she actually was a woman, Steve jumps to the conclusion that Roger turned himself into a girl using the purple sheep. It's quite a leap, even for them, but they're idiots. Unfortunately, they're idiots with infernal luck on their side, so there's a non-trivial chance that they're right about the sheep's abilities. But what do they want with a gender-bending sheep?

General Protection Fault — Star Trek and Star Wars have come to an end, and Dexter is in withdrawal. So he decides to write his own science fiction, and goes to Ki for advice on writing. If he comes up with something good, he should submit it to the Storyblogging Carnival.

Schlock Mercenary — Kevyn convinces Tagon that the Integrity is in pretty good shape, and it's time to get to work repairing it. Meanwhile, Schlock and future-Schlock meet for the first time, and prepare for an information exchange--by eating parts of one another. Ew! But you already knew amorphs were like that.

Friday, August 26, 2005

Sitemeter's now even cooler
Sitemeter now has a nifty new feature. It's always been able to tell you the IP address of people visiting your blog, but now it's even easier for me to stalk my readers, as it tells me what physical location they're visiting from. For example, check out this map.

I captured that from Sitemeter around 10:30 pm last night, and it shows me the locations of my last fifty visitors. Of course, I'm not sure where Sitemeter gets this information--it could just be the location of the ISP who owns the IP address. It's certainly not completely accurate, as it lists my location as Auburndale, Massachusetts, while I live in Waltham, Massachusetts. (Hey, I tried to get Sitemeter to ignore my visits, but my ISP uses dynamic addressing.) But it's still pretty cool, huh? This feature's been in development for the past month, and you can have a look at the Sitemeter blog where they discuss the details of adding country, state or region, city (it's only 50% accurate), coordinates, and finally, the map. You can check my Sitemeter page if you want to see the cities of my fifty most recent visitors.

Speaking of Sitemeter, I've noticed that over the last week my traffic's taken a bit of a dip. Before my Instalanche, I was averaging around 120-130 visitors a day, and now I'm barely breaking 100. I thought it unlikely that my traffic would significantly increase after the Instalanche, but I wasn't expecting it to decrease. Did I suddenly become less interesting to read? Or maybe people figured that with the Instalanche, I'd become part of the blogging bourgeois, and all my countercultural readers decided they needed to look elsewhere. Trust me, I'm just as edgy as ever! [Meaning not very. -ed You stay out of this! -DSC]
Anti-Satire
Scrappleface is a satire blog, although blog may be the wrong term for it. It's a satirical news site, releasing fictional news stories which parody real ones. As it's written by Scott Ott, a conservative, it usually parodies the Left, although it sometimes makes fun of conservatives as well. Recently Scott posted this article, which is most definitely not parody. It's beautiful. It's what we all wish Bush would say. If the White House is looking for any speechwriters, they could do worse than Scott Ott.

Thursday, August 25, 2005

Storyblogging Carnival XXVI is accepting submissions
Oops. I almost forgot to announce this. Curtis Schweitzer at Working Titles is hosting the next Storyblogging Carnival. Send your submissions to Curtis (curtis(dot)schweitzer(at)gmail(dot)com) with the following information:
  • Name of your blog
  • URL of your blog
  • Title of the story
  • URL for the blog entry where the story is posted
  • A word count
  • A suggested rating for adult content (G, PG, PG-13, R)
  • A short blurb describing the story

Entries are due this Saturday, August 27th, at 11:59 PM.
Eastward, Chapter 5 of Fire
The Rest of the Story: While you can read the whole of Fire here in Acrobat format, the preceding chapters are in convenient HTML format here.

This is where Gaius moves to the forefront, and I start to follow up on the war I accidentally started.


Chapter 5
Eastward

Gaius coughed in the dust kicked up by his horse’s hooves. Spitting grit from his mouth, he glared at the offending landscape. The dirt track, so different from the smooth pavement of most of the Empire’s roads, wound its way through hills hardly worthy of the name. Tall, brown grass covered the hills, fitfully rippling when the wind blew. The dead grass cracked as often as it bent, rendering the wave-like motion short-lived.

“Doesn’t this place ever get rain?” he asked his brother. Marcus rode beside him, looking preoccupied. Probably thinking responsible thoughts, Gaius mused.

“Sure it does, just not much,” Marcus replied, pausing to swat at a large black fly. Flies and gnats were the only life they had seen since yesterday, when a murder of crows and a bedraggled rabbit had crossed their path. “I usually manage not to be here during the season when it rains.”

“Why is that?”

“Well, aside from the fact that I don’t want to be here during the winter rains, the passes are closed during that time of year, so Publius doesn’t need me.”

“I meant, why does this place only get rain during certain seasons?”

“Oh, that. According to the Philosophers, it has something to do with the mountains to the east and how the prevailing winds change over the seasons.”

“The mountains? What do you mean?” Now Gaius swatted at the fly, as Marcus had successfully driven it in his direction.

“I mean that the mountains form a barrier that the clouds can’t get over.”

“If that’s the case, it should be a swamp on the other side.”

“Well, it does get plenty of rain. The forests on the far side of the mountains are greener than anything on this side.”

“And yet the Kawyr still want to come west. Why?”

“Your guess is as good as mine.”

“Maybe we should just let them have this god-forsaken place.”

“It’s not that easy, brother. We can’t just give away parts of the Empire, not even a ‘god-forsaken’ province like Ciskainia. Aside from setting a bad precedent, Novar citizens live here. Not many, true, but some find this land more to their liking than the rest of the Empire.”

Gaius was about to comment on the questionable sanity of such citizens when he noticed that Marcus was looking over his shoulder. Following his brother’s gaze, he had to shield his eyes against the late afternoon sun to see the dust cloud marking a sizeable group following them up the road. Marcus nodded in that direction. “Probably our escort. I suppose we shouldn’t have abandoned them this morning.”

Marcus spoke lightly, but Gaius knew that he had not been at all happy about leaving them. Marcus never let something as trite as the desire for a few hours of freedom get the better of his good sense. They were, after all, Imperial princes with a responsibility to the Empire. Though the calm politics of the day made assassination unlikely, it would be a fine thing for the Empire to lose them to bandits. Gaius didn’t believe that his brother would have any qualms about risking his life in battle, which he would see as nothing less than fulfilling his duty, but he didn’t have an ounce of recklessness in him. Gaius had had to cajole Marcus into leaving before most of their escort was awake, and then the older brother had come only because he knew his heedless sibling would go alone otherwise.

While Gaius was glad they had gotten out, he was not looking forward to their encounter with Brutus when he caught up. The scarred centurion led their escort, and while Gaius and Marcus outranked him, Brutus had taken advantage of their father’s insistence on who gave the orders until they reached the military outpost. He wasn’t exactly hostile towards them, but he had been a soldier longer than either of them had lived, and he thought that a couple of young princes could use an extra dose of discipline. It had not been a fun trip. Gaius had decided to get away at the first opportunity, and he still hoped to escape Brutus’s wrath.

“Hey, Marcus, how close is the fort?”

“Not close enough. We couldn’t make it before dark.”

“We don’t have to make it before dark, just before Brutus. Once we’re there, he can’t do anything to us.”

Marcus grinned unexpectedly, “Well, it’s worth a try.” Giving his horse a kick, he drove the gelding up to a trot, Gaius coming close behind. Responsible or not, it looked like Marcus had no desire to meet up with Brutus in a foul mood.

They were leading their horses in the moonlight by the time they reached the fort. Marcus refused to risk injuring the horses just to avoid Brutus’s punishment, so they had been walking them since sunset. Gaius had not complained. He may not have shared his brother’s blithe attitude toward Brutus’s discipline, but he did genuinely care for his horse.

The South Kainin Fort had evolved along the same lines as most Novar outposts. Starting out as a fortified camp for two legions, it had gradually become more and more permanent. Stone walls replaced earthen ramparts as brick barracks replaced tents. The only truly new elements were the towers on either side of each of the four gates which faced in the cardinal directions. Small brick homes and shops, as well as the occasional tavern, formed an army town on the north side. Soldiers needed someplace to spend their time and their pay, and while the Novar military strongly discouraged its legionaries from marrying, a few had families who stayed in the town. The main road avoided this town, ending at the western gate and beginning again at the eastern gate. The thoroughfare running straight through the fort had storage buildings on one side and the officers’ quarters and the forum on the other. Gaius and Marcus could see this road through the grilled metal gate as they waited outside.

“Who goes there?” called a soldier on the inside of the gate. He looked bored, tired, and sweaty beneath his banded armor. Though they could only see this one soldier, both brothers knew that archers watched from the tower.

“Marcus and Gaius Principius,” Gaius replied.

The guard started, and then relaxed with a grin. “You almost had me, but shouldn’t a pair of Imperial princes have an escort? Who are you really?”

Marcus smiled at that, and Gaius had to as well. The guard had it right, they should have an escort. He tried again, “We really are Marcus and Gaius Principius. Now could you please let us in? I’m sure Publius Aurelius will want to see us.”

“Calling the proconsul by name isn’t going to convince me you’re who you claim,” the soldier said, starting to become angry. Gaius figured the young man was new to the legions, likely on his first tour. “If you aren’t going to tell me who you are, you can come back tomorrow, when the gate’s open.”

That wouldn’t do at all. Whatever lead they had on Brutus, he would catch up to them long before morning. Gaius tried to keep his temper, “Perhaps you should call your centurion. He’ll probably recognize us.” He hoped so. He had no way of telling the century to which young soldier belonged.

The soldier appeared to consider that option. Legionaries learned soon after signing up that when in doubt, you can always pass responsibility to someone higher up. “The centurion won’t like me waking him up for a couple of jokers,” he balked.

“Look at it this way,” Marcus interrupted just as Gaius opened his mouth to dress down this stubborn guard. “If we’re not who we say we are, you can arrest us for impersonating Imperial princes. That’s a very serious crime, you know.”

“All right, we’ll see what the centurion has to say. You wait here.” He whistled to the unseen bowmen in the towers and strode off.

“Just how serious a crime is it to impersonate an Imperial prince?” Gaius asked his brother.

“I don’t know. I doubt anyone’s ever bothered.” Marcus looked him up and down. “Why anyone would ever pretend to be you is beyond me.”

“Like you’re any great prize,” Gaius snorted. If he looked anything like his brother right now, it shouldn’t surprise him that the guard didn’t believe them. Marcus wore nothing more elaborate than a simple white tunic long since gone brown with dirt. Likewise, the leather leggings he wore while riding were covered in the road’s dust, and his riding boots were scuffed and discolored as well. Dirt would have turned his face completely brown except for the furrows traced through it by runnels of sweat, and his hair had the wild disarray usually associated with madmen. In the flickering light from the gate’s torches, the effect was quite horrific.

It took nearly a quarter of an hour for the guard to return, followed by his stocky centurion. The scar which his salt-and-pepper beard tried to hide accentuated his scowl. He had dressed in a simple tunic which appeared to be on backwards. Likely he had only donned it after deciding that it was impolite to come to the gate naked. He carried the wooden cane that marked his rank as if looking to strike someone with it, its primary purpose.

“So where’s Brutus?” he asked. “He decide he was sick of you two and desert? After burying you alive, from the looks of it.”

“Oh, I’m sure Brutus is trying to catch up even as we speak, Victrinus,” Gaius said. “So if you’d be so kind as to let us in...”

“Ha! So you ditched him.” Victrinus’s grin looked even worse than his scowl. “I can’t say I blame you. The man hasn’t got an ounce of humor in him. Still, your father did put you in his care, so I should probably just leave you out there for him to find. After you finished digging latrines for him, you might finally make a decent pair of soldiers.”

“Victrinus, please.” It was not dignified for an Imperial prince to beg, but Gaius thought he could hear hoofbeats coming up the road.

“Oh, all right. Open the gate,” he called.

The soldier had seemed shocked at the easy camaraderie between the brothers and his centurion, but he hurried to comply. Once he had the gate open, he came up to Gaius looking very nervous, “S-sirs, I’m very sorry. I-I had no idea...”

Gaius probably would have said something sarcastic, but Marcus spoke first, “That’s okay, soldier. You were just doing your job. What’s your name?”

“P-paulus, sir. I mean, Servius Maximus Paulus.”

Marcus smiled. “Victrinus, you have a good soldier here.”

Victrinus looked at the younger man, who did not meet his eye, then winked at Marcus. “He’s young, but he’s learning. As long as he learns when to act on his own and when to come to me, he’ll live long enough to make centurion.”

The young man turned red, though whether from the compliment or the mild rebuke, Gaius couldn’t tell.

“What’s up with Paulus?” Gaius asked once they made it out of earshot. “I thought you had only veterans in your century.”

“Paulus is a veteran. He served four years in northern Ciskainia, then transferred down here just this year.”

“Really? He seems too young for that.”

“I think he may have joined a couple of years earlier than was strictly legal,” Victrinus replied. “He’s a native of Ciskainia, so he takes the defense of his homeland personally. Paulus really is a good soldier, even if he does sometimes act his age. I’m serious about him becoming a centurion. If he re-enlists, I’ll definitely recommend him.”

“Is Publius still awake?” Marcus changed the subject. “We should see him.”

“The proconsul’s always awake--he’s not getting enough sleep. Perhaps you can convince him to get some rest...”

“We’ll see what we can do,... Mother,” Gaius said the last under his breath.

Hooves and boots both echoed off the paved thoroughfare as Victrinus led them to the headquarters of the fort, a large brick building, consisting mainly of offices used by scribes and accountants, where the proconsul held court on the second floor. Light shined from one of the windows there, where Publius must be, since only he would still be working this late. Victrinus led them through the darkened, narrow corridor and up the stairs, where he rapped on one of the doors.

“What is it?” came from inside. Victrinus opened his mouth to respond, but didn’t get a word out before the irritated voice continued, “If you’re going to interrupt me, hurry up and come in.”

Victrinus opened the door, pointed Gaius and Marcus in, then made his escape. Publius sat at his desk, reading through reports while eating honeyed biscuits with his off-hand. He seemed not to notice that the reports were starting to become rather sticky. He glanced up at Gaius and Marcus. “Ah, you’re finally here.” He paused to eat another biscuit. “Sorry for being irritable, but... well, things here are irritating.”

“Were you waiting for us?” Marcus asked.

“More or less. I have one more tribune who’s late, but he can’t get here before the end of the month, so we’re going to have to march without him.”

“March where?” Gaius asked.

“To the Austral Pass, of course. Something’s happening on the other side of the mountains, and I’m not going to wait until the Kawyr come knocking on our gates to find out what. If they get through the mountains in force, this fort is not going to stop them from going wherever they want. We need to plug the pass.”

“Why the southern pass?” asked Marcus.

“Because the two legions guarding the northern passes report that the further north they go, the less the Kawyr seem affected. In the South, the villages are moving.”

“Are they gathering in the South?” Marcus pursued.

“The villages are moving north, but who knows where their warriors are? Once we reach the pass, we can send a cohort further in to find out more.”

“You want to send a full five hundred men?” Gaius blurted. “There’s no way you could hide that. Shouldn’t you send a smaller patrol?”

Publius had started shaking his head before Gaius finished. “I’d use a small patrol in the foothills on the other side, but not in the forest. You can’t hide from the Kawyr no matter what you do, my boy. Smaller patrols vanish. Larger ones make bigger targets, but they’re harder to take down. If you move quickly, you can reach some of their villages and see what you find there. Oh, they’ll be gone before you arrive, but if you’re fast enough, they won’t have time to clean up after themselves, and they might leave some clues behind.”

Gaius just couldn’t see how the Kawyr could know about everything that came through their land. By all reports, it wasn’t that densely populated. Marcus, on the other hand, had simply nodded at Publius’s words.

“So who will lead this patrol?” Gaius asked instead.

“You will,” Publius replied.

“Me?” Unlike his brother, who had served in Ciskainia since he joined the army, Gaius had risen through the ranks in Novitia. He’d only come east last year, when the office of tribune became open here. He’d never even gone on a patrol past the mountains before, much less led one. He thought he could handle it, but he hadn’t thought that Publius believed he could.

“Victrinus will go with you. You and Marcus are the only tribunes I trust to bend your stiff necks and listen to a more experienced centurion. Any of the others would do exactly the opposite just to prove that he wasn’t taking some Plebeian’s advice.” Publius looked at Gaius more closely, biscuit halfway to his mouth. “I can trust you to listen to Victrinus, can’t I?”

“I suppose,” Gaius mumbled.

“You can do better than that. You know something about the Kawyr by now, but you have little firsthand experience. I don’t want you getting people killed, yourself included, because you think you know better than Victrinus.”

“Sir, I have the utmost respect for Victrinus. I know that he understands the Kawyr better than I do, and I don’t intend to get anyone killed.”

“Marcus, what do you think?”

Marcus was watching Publius and Gaius in turn. “I think my brother can handle it, sir. He can be very stubborn, but he’s smart enough to know when to back down. He also respects Victrinus, which makes all the difference. We both do.”

“Publius, if you don’t trust me, you should send Marcus,” Gaius said, chafing under Publius’s doubts.

“I need Marcus with me, and you could use the experience. You understand well enough, I think. You’re in charge, my boy, but I expect you to listen to Victrinus and--”

“Of course, Proconsul,” Gaius cut off Publius before he could add “and do as he says.” He was to be a figurehead, then. The idea of only nominally leading the patrol was both irritating and reassuring. He thought he could do it, but he had never led a patrol beyond the pass before, and he feared that his lack of experience could get people killed. For that reason, Gaius was thankful for Victrinus’s presence. He did not like the fact that he would practically be taking orders from him, but that did relieve him of some of the terrifying responsibility for other people’s lives.

“Good. Now get some sleep. We need to get ready tomorrow so we can leave the day after.”



The army traveled at a good clip, making an average of fifteen miles each day. This greatly surpassed the usual daily march of ten miles for a full four legion army. Each soldier could travel such a distance in a few hours, but the army would remain strung out between the two camp sites for a full day. With only two legions, each man marched for six hours and the army travelled further. Of course, the longer journey made the men less eager to set up the fortified camp every night, but they managed it with a minimum of grumbling. Victrinus assured Gaius that they would travel even faster once their small force of five hundred reached the other side of the mountains.

For Gaius, the trip to the Austral Pass resembled his journey to the South Kainin Fort, except that there was a larger number of soldiers and consequently more dust. The jagged Kainin mountains grew steadily ahead of them, while in the land below lay little water, few trees, and fewer people. The respectable town which had grown up near the fort was an anomaly, a boisterous contrast to the scattered farming communities they had passed since then. As a few houses and an extended family or two did not warrant visiting, Gaius wished he had had a chance to spend some time in the fort’s town, if for no other reason than a change of company. Nearly a month had passed since he had spoken to anyone other than a soldier or one of the army’s slaves. Usually he could have enjoyed the comradery of the legionaries. While the new recruits tended to gawk at the Imperial princes, the veterans knew them and spoke almost as to equals. He had often enjoyed games of dice and conversations around campfires, sipping the bitter wine distributed to the troops. These days every man he spoke to offered unsolicited advice about the Kawyr and patrols in their land, and before long Gaius grew sick of hearing it. Much of it was unbelievable, and many of the stories contradictory. How could a Kawyr be aware of everything within a twenty mile radius? Did they see like owls at night, or did darkness completely debilitate them? It seemed unlikely that they could fly or burrow through the ground as if it were water, much less both. Gaius knew for a fact that they weren’t unbeatable in combat, but he almost believed the men who said they never missed with their longbows. The veterans certainly believed it, though only a few of even them had actually seen a Kawyr. Victrinus had seen plenty of Kawyr, and he seemed determined to fill in the gaps in Gaius’s education. He lectured at length on the ghost-like Kawyr and their invisible villages until the tribune called him on his exaggerations, when he admitted that the Novari had learned the signs to look for in order to find the hidden villages and that while Novar outposts in the foothills couldn’t keep track of the Kawyr scouts, they could spot large groups of Kawyr moving along the elevated roads. Gaius soon started to avoid Victrinus and his lectures.

Still, Gaius would have enjoyed the journey if not for some unexpected travelling companions. A dozen Domini had joined the legions, the first time he had seen the black-robed creatures travel with the Novar army. According to Publius, they had shown up a few days before Marcus and Gaius had, asked Publius whether he was traveling to the pass, and then told him that they would be coming with him. No one had the courage to ask the Domini why they were coming. While most of the troops simply pretended not to see them, Gaius had to force himself not to glare. Thoughts of Victor flashed through his head every time he saw the black-robed strangers. He had no idea what those monsters had done to his brother. Afraid that he might do something suicidally stupid if he had to speak to one of them, Gaius did his best to avoid them. If his father could do nothing for Victor, what could he hope to accomplish? Remembering the long, impassioned arguments with his father only stoked his anger. The elder Marcus Principius’s calmness and lack of overt grief had infuriated him. Gaius hoped his attitude stemmed from powerlessness, not indifference.

As tense as the trip had made him, Gaius was almost sorry to see it end when they reached the Austral Pass on the seventh day. After a long climb through the foothills, encountering more rocks and less dust, they had spent the last day in a narrow gorge before reaching this point. The sweltering heat of the lowlands had given way to the colder air of the heights, and occasional patches of snow appeared to remind them of what lay ahead, where the snow-covered peaks of the Kainin mountains marked the edge of the Novar Empire. Travelling through the mountain range was dangerous and slow in all but a handful of passes, the southernmost of which they were sealing off. During the winter, the snow closed off even the best passes. Nearly a foot remained even now in early spring. During the summer, permanent fortifications, which the Novari had built from stones hewn from the mountains, ensured the border’s security. A wall, twenty feet high and ten wide, stretched across the entire mile-long width of the pass, with a tower every hundred yards, and a solid wooden gate, backed by an iron portcullis which provided the sole entry point. A smallish fortress behind the wall provided a base camp for its defenders and a fall-back position should it fail. No sooner had the men begun to move in than Publius informed Gaius that he and his cohort would have a day to rest up before they began their patrol.

Gaius could not decide whether he felt more excitement or fear. While he enjoyed the perks of leadership, he had never enjoyed the responsibilities, and nothing frightened him as much as having other people’s lives depend on him. For that reason, at least, he appreciated Victrinus’s presence, though there remained plenty of reasons to resent it. Though he awoke early the next day, he soon learned that Victrinus already had preparations well in hand. With nothing else to do, he tried to chat with the men who would be going with him. Most of them seemed as high strung as he, however, and he soon found himself walking about alone, trying not to think about what lay ahead.

Inside the camp, thousands of soldiers had churned the snow into an ugly gray slush to match the ugly gray buildings. Abandoning the small shelter of the fort, Gaius wandered outside where at least some patches of snow resembled the pristine whiteness described by poets. He trudged through undisturbed drifts of it to the eastern side of the fort, ignoring the cold and damp which seeped through his clothes. Though still early in the afternoon, light and warmth were in short supply. Deciding that he didn’t care, he leaned against the fort’s wall and watched the skies dim behind the barrier meant to stop the Kawyr. Marcus found him there, still watching and wondering what really lay to the east.

“Frightened?” his brother asked.

“Nah. It’s just a patrol,” Gaius lied. “What’s there to be scared of?”

“Plenty. I’m always terrified when I lead a patrol into their land.”

Gaius turned to look at his brother. “You, Marcus? I’ve never seen you frightened.”

“It’s important not to show it. Your men will look to you for encouragement. When everything comes apart, the commander’s self-assurance is the only thing that can hold them together.”

“I’m not even the real commander. All I’m supposed to do is listen to Victrinus and do what he says.” He hoped he didn’t sound too bitter. “I’m a figurehead at best.”

“That, Gaius, is sometimes what a commander most needs to be.” Marcus smiled. “It’s just as important as clever strategies and superb tactics.”

“What about Publius?” Gaius asked.

“Publius... is a special case.”

Gaius snorted. “He’s not much of a figurehead. He looks like he should be entertaining guests at a dinner party, not leading troops into battle.”

“That’s why he surrounds himself with men who do look like soldiers. They know he’s a superb general, and their confidence in him inspires their troops. That image is one he cultivates carefully, by the way. Partly because he knows that he can’t look like a great warrior, and would appear foolish if he tried. Partly because it irritates the politicians back home.”

“So you don’t think I should imitate Publius?”

“No--he’s probably not the best role model. You certainly don’t have enough of a reputation that you can get away with it. Besides, even though Publius doesn’t look soldierly, he never acts cowardly or indecisive. That much you can imitate. You need to look like the ideal Novar general: bold, decisive, confident. You should never seem frightened, or uncertain, or helpless, even when you feel all of those things.”

“Sounds hard. What if men die?”

“There’s no ‘if’ there. Men will die, they always do on patrols into the Kawyr lands. Grieve them, but not too much. Your first duty is to the living, to bring them home.”

Gaius looked at the pass, shrouded in darkness as the sun set behind them. “I’ll try.”



Only a few days had passed before Gaius wished he had flat out refused Publius’s commission. He had even begun to miss the sun and dust on the other side of the Kainin mountains. In the west lay the dusty plains sweltering under the sun. In the east lived an immense forest drowning in rain. The nearly continuous rainfall did little to relieve the heat and much to exacerbate the humidity. Horses and soldiers churned up a rich black mud, occasionally revealing a hard red clay just a few inches beneath. Even though he rode, mud had spattered Gaius from his head to his damp feet. Most of the soldiers were even more miserable, and nothing was clean these days. Gaius had hoped at first that the trees would keep the rain off, but instead they ensured that though the rain may stop, water would continue to drip from above. Even when the sun was shining, the leafy canopy kept the ground in shadow. He could only see the tops of a few small, young trees, while a solid roof of green hid the sky. Some massive onyas, as Victrinus said the Kawyr called them, stretched even higher, leaving only their thick trunks visible. Gaius could just make out colorful flowers and ferns which somehow seemed to be growing high up on the trees. Few plants grew closer to the ground, just some mushrooms which speckled the massive roots and some vines which seemed to be reaching downward, winding around the trunks of massive trees as if to uproot them. The lack of underbrush made it possible for the cohort to travel quickly despite the mud.

Just as few plants lived on the ground, most of the animals seemed to live above in the canopy. A shiver running along the branches would announce a diverse flock of birds taking flight, driving insects and other prey before them. The cacophony of clashing calls at least had a few pleasing notes among them. The Howlers were another matter. The first time Gaius had heard their wails, almost human but unmistakably other, he had been convinced not only of the truth of the Kairnin legends about spirits whose voices caused madness, but that the banshees were coming for them. Even after Victrinus had assured him that the hunting pack sought something other than them, the sound caused the hair on the back of his neck to stand on end. Gaius had forced himself to laugh at his own embarrassment, wondering why he had never noticed how condescending Victrinus could be before. None of the men had ever actually seen a Howler, but the accepted legend described them as small, grotesque men covered in hair, whose razor sharp claws neatly eviscerated their prey. No one knew what they actually hunted in the trees, but some thought it was the Kawyr. Surprisingly, no one cheered the Howlers.

A few creatures lived below, however, and some of these were not waiting for Kawyr. A huge cat had mauled one of the horses before the soldiers drove it off. They had to put down the horse and leave it behind, where the cat undoubtedly feasted on it later. That no one had seen the cat before it had leapt from an overhanging limb alarmed the newer recruits, and they began to keep their eyes above rather than on the ground. That did not help one of them avoid a large snake which lowered itself from above to wrap around him. Rather than biting, it had tightened almost gently around his chest, intent on preventing any indrawn breath. Fortunately, his metal armor confused the snake’s instincts, as it took some time to kill the snake and disentangle him from it. The young soldier had emerged pale and breathless but alive. His armor, on the other hand, was crushed beyond repair.

Despite these adventures, the small force had travelled more quickly than any army with which Gaius had ridden. They made nearly twenty miles each day, and still managed to raise a fortified camp out of the muck every night. That speed seemed even more incredible considering the twisting course they followed. Gaius decided not to ask why it seemed more convoluted than strictly necessary. He was tired of having his senior centurion explain everything to him. Rather than travelling in normal marching order, with the officers in the front and the baggage train in the back, the men marched in a tight hollow square, with supplies and all the mounted men, including officers, in the center. As the trees did not offer enough space for the army to pass between them, the force divided around the trees like a river around islands. The young tribune had followed Victrinus’s advice to keep things as compact and easy to defend as possible. He seemed to be taking a lot of advice from Victrinus lately. The centurion was always respectful, even humble, in offering his suggestions, but Gaius knew better than to refuse them. He recognized good advice, but it galled, especially when Victrinus would correct his own orders, or even praise him when he somehow managed to get it right. Even that wasn’t as bad as when he would patronizingly let Gaius have his way in some small matter.

The force contained six hundred men and fewer than thirty non-combatants. Six centuries, each with eighty men, made up the main body, while two turmae of thirty-three horsemen each rode in the middle. The rest were mostly officers and the few slaves they brought with them, along with a trio of Philosophers, an engineer and two physicians. Then there was the Dominus. The man had not spoken more than a word or two since he had unexpectedly ridden out with them. He should have faded into the background from the way he kept to himself, but all eyes would drift in his direction whenever he came near. Gaius did his best to avoid him, especially after what happened on the third day from the pass.

The reason for keeping such a tight formation became apparent that day, when they encountered their first Kawyr raid. As soon as the arrows started to pour from above, Victrinus’s shouted orders had the soldiers crouching behind their large shields, protecting themselves and the officers who hid behind them. Gaius had crouched behind the shield wall next to the mud spattered centurion, who looked ridiculous squatting in the mud in his silvered armor and sideways crested helm. “Shouldn’t we order a charge?” he had yelled, thinking a flight of javelins followed by onrushing armored men would break up any company of bowmen.

“Yeah, we could try it,” Victrinus had said, looking skyward. Gaius had belatedly realized then that the arrows were coming from above, among the branches of one of the trees. “If we wanted to chase them out we’d have to chop down the tree. Of course, if we tried that, they’d just have a nice straight shot at us. They’d probably move to another tree before we got halfway through, anyway. Most likely they’ll retreat when they see they’re not doing much harm.” Indeed, although the initial assault had killed several men, the continuing fire could not penetrate the shield wall. Their weaving course had not taken them directly under the tree from which the Kawyr had staged the assault, so the height advantage did not give the Kawyr enough of an angle. Victrinus had then shouted another order, and the Novar bowmen, safely behind the infantry’s shields, fired their own arrows into the tree. “Maybe we’ll get lucky and take down some. If not, we’ll have to try to burn them out. We have fire arrows for that purpose.”

“Allow me.” Both centurion and tribune had wheeled in their squatted position when they heard the voice directly behind them. Neither had known the Dominus was standing there, fully erect as if daring the Kawyr to shoot at him. He never said or did anything more that they saw, but they had no other explanation for the conflagration which had suddenly engulfed the tree. The screams which broke out among the branches were echoed by the Novar legionaries. Gaius could vividly remember the bright flames wrapped around every limb of the tree, the wash of heat he felt even from his distant vantage point, and the dark shapes which plummeted to the ground. Some of those shapes had been branches, others had once been Kawyr. Several hours had passed before they could come close enough to tell which was which. Gaius had never seen a Dominus do something like that before. He had always heard that they had power, and he supposed he had believed it. Witnessing it firsthand shook him badly, though. Victor’s disappearance had sharpened his distrust and fear of the Domini into loathing. Never before had he felt anything akin to awe toward them, however. He hated them even more for being so untouchable.

They had buried human and Kawyr both in the shadow of the smoking, miraculously still living, tree. No other tree had been touched by the magical fire. Surprisingly, Victrinus had recommended taking the time to bury the Kawyr, rather than pressing to cover more ground as usual. “We killed these Kawyr unnaturally,” he had said, casting his eyes in the direction of the Dominus. “We need to show that we aren’t monsters.”

“Show who? The Kawyr?” Gaius had asked. “Do you think they’re still watching?”

“Probably, but it’s not them we need to convince.” The centurion had gestured to the nearby men, still staring in horror at what the Dominus had done. Few stared openly at the Dominus himself, who didn’t seem to care one way or another. He watched as they buried the bodies, little more than bones with a few strips of blackened flesh. “It’s ourselves,” Victrinus had finished unnecessarily.

They reached the Kawyr village on the fifth day.

They had stopped early the night before and camped six miles from the village. In the morning, the infantry remained in camp while the horsemen rode out to inspect the village. Victrinus summarized his reasons for both decisions succinctly, “So we can retreat quickly, and so we have somewhere to retreat to.” Gaius found this peculiar considering the centurion’s insistence that Kawyr had abandoned the settlement. “Most of the villagers will have left,” Victrinus explained. “But it doesn’t take that many to set up an ambush. Be careful.”

Gaius had never seen a Kawyr village before, and for a while he didn’t see this one. The patrol reined up in front of what looked like a large hill. Only gradually did he come to realize that it was not a natural formation. “That’s what we would call a basilica,” Victrinus told him. “It’s a meeting hall, where they conduct the village’s business.”

Though Victrinus had told him that the Kawyr hid their villages, Gaius still looked at the odd building in bewilderment. At first glance, it appeared nothing more than a large hillock. Only after a close inspection did Gaius realize that though covered with the dark soil, the building was made of hardened red clay. Cleverly disguised openings let in light, and Gaius spent several minutes looking for the door. Even with one building evident, he could not locate the rest of the village.

Pointing upward, Victrinus continued his commentary. “Like the animals, the Kawyr live above. This building and a few like it are on the ground mainly because the canopy can’t be support them.”

Gaius had already heard that they Kawyr lived in the trees, but he hadn’t completely believed it. Deciding that he’d rather avoid the lecture, he left Victrinus investigating the meeting hall and accompanied one of the other veterans in his explorations. With his help, he managed to locate a means to reach the higher levels, where the buttressing roots of one tree gave way to branches all twisted together to form a subtle ramp. He broke through the canopy into the brilliant sunlight and another world entirely. Where the shadowed regions below tended towards shades of brown with a roof of green, here colors thrived. Enormous blue butterflies roosted on red and white flowers which, though rooted on the trees, were not part of them. The blue creatures flickered in and out of sight behind the drab undersides of their wings. Large, narrow-bodied green and blue insects, several inches long with huge translucent wings, fluttered among the heights as well. From some of the trees hung drooping bunches of yellow and red flowers, among which emerald and ruby hummingbirds darted, greedily seeking nectar. Large red birds with yellow and blue banded wings flew above the trees, crying out to one another in voices sounded more human and less otherworldly than the terrifying Howlers.

Here he also found a village he could see, carved into living trees. “Carved” wasn’t the right word, as nothing about the trees indicated that they had been cut in any way. Rather, they appeared to have simply grown to accommodate the Kawyr. While no home approached the size of the townhouse he had lived in since a teenager, they could support families more comfortably than Novaro’s tenements. Pathways of braided branches and thick vines led from building to building, but Gaius didn’t want to trust his weight to a bridge he could barely make out from the trees. The limb to which the ramp had brought him was just wide enough that he could stand on it easily. He turned his attention to the home which shared it with him.

A split in the trunk marked the point where the house began. Many limbs radiated out from that point, splitting again and again to form the floor. At the edges, branches twisted upwards, among which vines grew to make a loose but sturdy wall. Above, the tree closed again, numerous large leaves overlapping to form a solid roof. An irregularly shaped window, seeming almost accidental, opened into the home, where he could see inner walls also made of branches interwoven with vines. Just outside the window grew a very odd plant. Its numerous small roots clung to a branch coming off the limb on which Gaius stood, while large leaves stemmed from a central base, stretching straight up to the height of his waist. The leaves overlapped to form a narrow bowl containing several gallons of water surrounded by stalks topped with small, wilting white flowers. A swarm of mosquitoes flew around the plant, avoiding the flowers and their lingering potency. Looking up, Gaius could see a clear opening to the sky above the water-bowl plant.

When he entered the home, brushing aside a curtain of dying purple flowers, he immediately discovered that vines also contributed to the flooring. When Gaius stepped off one of limbs, the floor gave way slightly beneath him. While he thought it could hold his weight, the effect was disconcerting, and he did his best not to step anywhere but on the branches. He wandered from room to room, trying to figure out the use for each. The dwelling was larger than he had first realized, with several rooms on each of the two levels. He found some familiar items in his searching. The earthenware pottery could have belonged to any Novar home. Strands of some odd material had been twisted and knotted to form hammocks which hung in several rooms. Thin sheets of the same material and blankets of fur draped over them. He saw numerous instruments of carefully polished bone and wood, but only a few made of metal.

He was still exploring the elevated home when he encountered the Dominus doing the same. The Dominus addressed him even as he turned to escape. “This house has been abandoned for weeks, long before we came here. They didn’t leave on account of us.”

“How do you know that?” Gaius asked over his shoulder. They had come for this sort of information, so he doubted Publius would care whether he liked the source.

“Magic,” the Dominus replied easily. “Although there are other signs.”

“Like?” Gaius asked impatiently.

“Look at this home. It is shaped from a living tree, not hacked and carved like we would, but guided--”

“I didn’t realize that the Kawyr lived in such harmony with nature.”

“Harmony? I suppose you can say that, if you believe that master and slave live in harmony. My point, though, is that the tree no longer has guidance, and it’s begun to show.”

Now that the Dominus mentioned it, Gaius could see what meant. In most places the walls were well-defined, but in spots vines and branches spilled into the home. The dense, formerly impenetrable roof now had small holes which were growing larger. A few leaves, still green but wilting, lay on the floor. Gaius had little idea how long it would have taken to reach this state, but he knew that no home which could change so much overnight would be habitable. He also remembered the water in the large plant outside which had become a nesting ground for mosquitoes. If the Kawyr planned to use it as drinking water now, they’d have to strain out the insects.

“So how long ago did they leave? And why?”

“Why is harder to discern. My magic cannot read minds. It can only tell what passed here, and that is... difficult.”

Gaius decided that if the Dominus could not give him any real information, he wouldn’t bother asking. Besides, could he really trust the information he got from one of them? He was trying to remember the location of the door when he saw something through the window.

Not far outside the home lay one of those few openings in the forest where green plants could thrive near the ground, illumined by the sunlight which the cloud-gathering sky let through for the moment. Hundreds of men were skirting the uncharacteristic undergrowth, moving around the edge of the clearing. Those on foot wore mismatched leather armor and carried varied weapons, but weapons which seemed to be of high quality. About a fourth wore light mail covered in colorful tabards and rode ponies which maneuvered around the plants and trees with ease. The large force was headed straight for the village, several wagons in tow.

The oddest thing about these men, however, was that they were green.

The Dominus followed his gaze out the window, and when he spoke Gaius could hear a definite note of satisfaction. “Those, young tribune, would be Orcs. It seems that they’re back.”


This chapter is 7,647 words long, the longest one in Fire, bringing the portion of the story that's been posted on the blog to 29,386 words. Fire is 90,110 words in all.

Wednesday, August 24, 2005

Look! Over there!
Since I don't have any good blogging ideas of my own today, I'll just borrow a page from Doc Rampage's book and talk about what other people are writing. In this case I'll specifically point out what Doc Rampage is writing:
  • Doc Rampage demonstrates how not to write an interesting blog post in what turns out to be, in its own way, an interesting post.
  • He also makes an argument that Christians and Muslims believe in the same God. This is an argument I've made myself, although I can't recall doing it on this blog. The gist is that you can believe very different things about something and yet still be talking about the same thing.

Okay, I'm tapped for now. Maybe I'll come up with something interesting to write about later tonight. At the least, I need to post the next chapter of Fire sooner or later.

Tuesday, August 23, 2005

Looking for readers
I've finally finished the first draft of the story I intend to submit to Faith in Fiction's writing contest. I think it turned out okay, but I need some independent opinions. Now, I don't intend to even look at the story again for a few weeks, in order to gain the distance I need to properly revise it, but I'd also like the opinions of some other folks. I haven't really decided whether to have them look at the current version or the next revision. I'd prefer to wait for the next revision, but I'm not sure I'll have time considering the short time frame until the story's due (September 30th). If you're interested in helping me out, let me know. In some ways, the more critical you can be of my work, the better.
JK Rowlings's net worth
How rich is JK Rowlings, the author and creator of the popular Harry Potter series? You've heard the rumors: She's richer than the Queen of England. She's the richest woman in the UK. She's the richest woman in the world. She's catching up with Bill Gates! Well, there's an easy way to find out the truth, as Forbes magazine annually puts together a listing of the richest people in the world. As this list can be sorted by country, it's a breeze to check the UK listing and see where JK Rowlings falls on that. She's at the very bottom of the UK list, but even the bottom of the list of the world's richest people means she has 1.0 billion dollars to her name, which is nothing to sneeze at. I don't know of any other writers who have that much money, but then, I haven't gone through the list thoroughly. So are there any women in England who are richer? Well, some of the families are richer, with Philip & Cristina Green at the top with $6.8 billion. But Cristina lives in Monaco, not the UK, and she's the only other woman listed by name, so I guess it's fair to say that JK Rowlings is the richest woman in England.

But what about the Queen? Royalty isn't included on this list, because of a number of caveats involved:
Be warned: Valuing these folks is a tricky business. For starters, one must figure out what actually belongs to them and what belongs to their throne or their country. For instance, Forbes does not count the crown jewels or Buckingham Palace as part of Queen Elizabeth II's net worth. She enjoys these riches, but they technically belong to the British state, much like the White House belongs to the U.S. government.

But Forbes makes the attempt, and values Queen Elizabeth at $330 million. So JK Rowlings is richer than the Queen.

But is she the richest woman in the world? Not quite. That honor is held jointly by Helen and Alice Walton, the widow and daughter, respectively, of Sam Walton, the founder of Walmart, who are each worth $18.0 billion. The wealthiest self-made woman is Rosalia Mera of Spain, worth $2.0 billion.

As for Bill Gates, I think it will be a long time before JK Rowlings can catch up to him, as he's currently at $46.5 billion.

(Hat tip to Ask Yahoo who did much of the heavy lifting identifying women on Forbes' list.)

Monday, August 22, 2005

Most recent news on Mauritania
So what's happened in Mauritania since I posted last week? Well, this sounds promising, although it doesn't necessarily mean much in itself:
Leader of the opposition Progressive Popular Alliance (APP) party, Messaoud Ould Belkheir, said Friday that he has discussed the 1989 turmoil that shook the country concerning its humanitarian record, especially problem of slavery and expulsions, with the new military rulers here.

According to Belkheir, Colonel Ely Ould Mohamed Vall, who is the chairman of the ruling Military Council for Justice and Democracy (MCJD), initiated the Thursday meeting.
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Observers said this was the first time that an opposition official had evoked the humanitarian issue and the question of slavery with a Mauritanian president, a move likely to "break the ice."

The new leader did not give a firm pledge, but mere listening to Belkheir`s views was a positive development compared to ousted President Ould Taya`s attitude, according to observers.

Meanwhile, former president Taya has left Gambia and gone to Qatar, where he's reportedly been offered asylum. Although he's gone, his political party has been reorganizing, while the junta has at least recognized the legitimacy of other opposition parties. One thing I noticed while doing my news search is that most of the articles that come up are about the famine there. The nation's cereal crop is 36% lower than the five-year average.

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New blog on the roll
If you're interested in what a Christian environmental scientist has to say, there's a blog called The Evangelical Ecologist. Check it out.
Weekly Webcomic Update
Another week, another late update.

Sluggy Freelance — The demons are back! K'Z'K's crew is looking to pick up the pieces and prepare the way for another sentient piece of K'Z'K. Meanwhile, they've taken over Meander from the 28 Geeks Later storyline, which is too bad, even if she is a minor character.

Day by Day — Cindy Sheehan, the MSM, Air America, and Christopher Walken get the attention they deserve. And sometimes, I too wonder what it'd be like if Karl Rove were the evil genius he's considered to be.

Scary Go Round — Shelley and Moon shake Fallon and make a bid for freedom, returning to England. I wonder how Shelley will react to her zombie duplicate's capture?

College Roomies from Hell!!! — And we're back! Dave naturally does something stupid. After arguing with Jay, who claims to be sleeping with Blue, he throws Mike's cell phone out the window, then climbs out on the ledge so he can retrieve it without Mike finding out. Not the smartest move, Dave. And now's a very bad time to brainwarp just because you see a half-naked Margaret through the window. You don't want to wind up in Mexico again, do you? Mike, meanwhile, has to deal with his dad, who's shown up for a visit, likely to talk about spring break. Finally, Roger has to tell Lily that their mother is dead. I hope she doesn't go ballistic and try to kill Margaret. If she does, I hope Dave's around. Laservision beats werecoyote every time.

General Protection Fault — Fred's trial wraps up. He's acquitted, while Trent is facing trial for attempting to kill him, which leads to him being fired from his job. And now that Fred's a celebrity, it's going to his head. And who is this strange slime mold named Socrates? Isn't he from the Surreptitious Machinations storyline?

Schlock Mercenary — En route to find their new ship, we learn a little bit about Der Trihs's past. He's always seemed a pretty pathetic figure. It's interesting to learn that he was once a brilliant tactician before he had most of his brain eaten.

Sunday, August 21, 2005

Deleting comments
I don't usually delete comments. I don't get enough as it is, and letting people say what they want, especially when they disagree with me, improves the discussion on this blog. I did delete one recently, though. It was added to an old post, back from March, highlighting Nick Queen's Out of the Wilderness showcase.

I could tell it was trouble since it started with "I would just like to say a prayer to our Lord Jesus, for our troops in Iraq." First of all, the post had nothing to do with Iraq, so it was irrelevant. Second, posting a prayer on someone else's blog is a sure sign you're not directing it towards God, but towards the blogger and his readers. Whatever happened to going into one's closet to pray? And, as might be expected, it quickly turned vicious: "Let us remember what the true mercy of your teaching brings, when we identify the spirit of anti-christ that is in George Bush, and the rest of his minions who serve the corruption in our current government. Lord Jesus, in your infinite mercy, please bring down a punishment upon these evildoers, who abuse your name for evil purposes." Okay, then. Now, I might disagree with this person, but it's hard to imagine trying to engage her in discussion when she's asking God to rain judgement on my head. Or maybe I don't qualify as one of Bush's minions, but I do believe we're doing the right thing in Iraq, and even if I disagreed, it'd be quite a leap to jump from believing George Bush is wrong, to believing he's evil. Part of being a Christian means loving your fellow believers, even when they're wrong, even when they're sinning. If you can just casually label anyone you disagree with as a non-believer, indeed as a wolf in sheep's clothing, as possessed of the spirit of the anti-christ himself, then you're missing the point. We're not called to love one another because it's easy--it's not!--but because it's right. We're even called to love, and pray for, those who persecute us. If you want to do otherwise, then please don't use my blog to ask God to destroy them.

Friday, August 19, 2005

More Mauritania
If you're looking for more news about Mauritania, one of the quick and easy ways is to do a search on "Mauritania coup" on one of the news search engines. When I did it, the first article to turn up was that the President of Nigeria is urging the coup leaders to restore democracy, from, interestingly enough, Al Jazeera. Lexis-Nexis is probably the best engine for this, but it's not free and you probably only have access if your institution does.

Meanwhile, I've heard from other bloggers who've been covering this, including Elizabeth at Military Christians. She takes a look at the ethical questions concerning coups. Jason Coleman, whom I mentioned in my previous posts, also has lots on this.

Update: Armchair Capitalists has more, and Dean Esmay recommends Freedom House's report.
Yesterday and today
Glenn Reynolds took note of my post on Mauritania yesterday and I received an Instalanche, with over 1,600 visits over the last twelve hours of yesterday. If you're curious, I do intend to continue to follow developments in Mauritania. I'll also link to other blogs that are doing the same. It's something that we need to keep an eye on.

I won't have much else to post today, as Friday is always a slow blogging day since I don't have time to prepare anything the night before and I have to work during the day. I may have something this evening, though.

Thursday, August 18, 2005

Galactic Bar
No, it's not the subject of a sci-fi story, or the result of the search for drunken intelligent life, which is what I thought of when I saw the headline: "Study Details Bar at Center of Milky Way." Rather, it turns out that the Milky Way has a more unique shape than we thought. Maybe you ought to just read the article. As you can see, there is a 27,000 light-year long bar of stars across the center of the Milky Way, as shown in this artist rendition from the University of Wisconsin website:

Freaky, huh? At this point I haven't seen any ideas as to why it's there, but I wonder where it's pointing, don't you?
Christian Carnival online
The latest Christian Carnival, the eighty-third, is up at All Times of Kind. I meant to submit my review of Aitken's biography of Chuck Colson, but I made the mistake of letting Gmail automatically complete the e-mail, and I ended up sending my submission to the wrong place. Hopefully the next carnival will accept it, even though the carnival usually only accepts entries that have been posted since the last Carnival's submission deadline.

Wednesday, August 17, 2005

Writing breakthrough
I've spent a good bit of time working on my entry for the Writing Contest I mentioned earlier. As of Monday night, I had written 4,000 words for a 3,000 word limit short story and I didn't seem to be getting anywhere. At the center of the story is the character's argument with God, but I couldn't seem to get the argument right--it kept going around in circles, or off on tangents, or following non sequiturs. It was beginning to look like I wouldn't have an entry for the contest.

At that point I decided that I had had enough of what I was doing. If the central point of the story is the argument, then I needed to write that and only that: all the background information, the probing of the character's thoughts and feelings and motivation, the descriptions of his environs and his gestures, all of that needed to be done away with, so that all that was left was the argument itself, to stand and fall on its own. So that's what I did Monday night, and the result was... better. It's not perfect, certainly, but it's coherent, which is more than I can say for what I had written previoiusly. Most of what I had before is going to go in the bitbucket, which is good as I now have 5,000 words and a 3,000 word limit. Then I have to figure out some way to fill in the background and the aftermath, writing around the argument now rather than trying to interweave things. So I still have a lot to do before the story's done, but I'm feeling a lot more confident that the story will eventually get done.
Mauritania
This month's most underreported news story has got to be the military coup in Mauritania, a West African country whose president had aligned it with the US in the war on terror. I only know about the coup because a co-worker mentioned both it and its lack of coverage in the media, and I decided to look into it. The coup took place on Wednesday, August 3rd, while President Taya was attending the funeral of King Fahd of Saudi Arabia. The former President has since gone into exile in Gambia, while the military and security forces which seized control installed Colonel Ely Ould Mohamed Vall as the new leader.

Now, before we all side with the rightful president, it should be noted that Taya is no great prize. He came to power in a coup in 1984, and was confirmed by seriously flawed elections in 1997 and 2003. He has a history of jailing political opponents, some of whom have been freed since the coup, claiming that they are plotting the overthrow of his government and labelling them as Islamic extremists. While many experts dispute that these opponents are violent extremists, apparently someone in the military Taya tried so hard to purge was plotting his overthrow. His failure to root out his enemies may have something to do with his purges being more about racism than ideology, such as when he emptied his military of black Africans in the nineties.

So, clearly Taya is an unsavory type, going so far as to side with Saddam in the first Gulf War. However, he also knew which way the political winds were blowing, and decided to align himself with the US in the late nineties. He even established diplomatic ties with Israel six years ago, making Mauritania one of only three Arab League nations to do so. Mauritania has assisted the US in the War on Terror, and US troops have trained Mauritanian forces.

Now this military junta, calling itself the Military Council for Justice and Democracy, has taken over, and it promises to hold elections within two years, not only allowing opposition political parties but promising that no member of the 17-man junta will run for office. They have also said that they will honor all international obligations currently in place--although what they may have in mind are the oil contracts for the offshore drilling that has begun there more than anything else.

The spread of democracy is good, and if the military junta can be trusted to keep to its promises, then the removal of Taya isn't in itself a bad thing. However, the leaders of coups don't often make a successful transition to democracy. Equally troubling is that the things which have made Taya so unpopular recently were his attempts to get on our good side, especially his recognition of Israel: some of the leadership in the new government is calling that a mistake. The new leadership seems to be aligning itself with the Islamic political parties, which loudly claim that they are not extremist. This may be true, but if the recently freed political prisoners are the brothers which the terrorist organization Salafist Group for Preaching and Combat claimed to be supporting in their June 4th attack which killed dozens, they're probably not what we would call moderates.

Originally, the US, the UN, and the African Union strongly condemned the coup. Since then, however, the African Union has been thoroughly won over, and the US has begun negotiating with the new government, which says it is still committed to the War on Terror. While I have my qualms about the new government, I think that this is probably the right thing to do. Democracy has a better chance of happening under it than it did under Taya.

Update: Welcome Instapundit readers. When I was looking for information about the coup in my favorite blogs, I discovered that Glenn was one of the few to have noticed it, and he linked to a couple of other blogs with more information, including Gateway Pundit and Publius. Glenn even links to an eyewitness account. Jason Coleman has also been following it. I'm glad it didn't pass the blogosphere by entirely, but it has received so little attention that I had overlooked these posts until after I had written this and gone looking for more information. I would have expected significant debate over whom the US ought to support when there's no one who's clearly aligned with our interests and ideals.

Tuesday, August 16, 2005

Review of Jonathan Aitken's Charles W. Colson: A Life Redeemed, Part 2
Old Post: The first part of this review can be found here.

One tendency that Christians have when telling a conversion story is to overemphasize the bad before conversion, and overemphasize the good afterwards. Thus, to hear many such stories, the subject was a demon in human flesh before he was Born Again, but a saint afterwards. This is a mistake. The transforming power of God is an awesome enough work to witness that anything less than the stark, honest truth lessons the impact. Thus I appreciate Jonathan Aitken's candor and fairness towards Colson in his biography, both before and after Colson's conversion. Thus, even in his younger days, we see in Colson someone who is often compassionate and loyal, and even after his conversion we see someone who is often overbearing and proud. Aitken shows us a Colson who was neither a villain before his conversion, nor an angel afterwards. What changed was not so much his manner and personality, his strengths and his weaknesses, but his motivation. Conversion works from the core outward, not from the outside in.

Aitken is in a unique position to empathetically tell Colson's tell. He, like Colson, was an up-and-comer in conservative politics, British politics in his case, before scandal hit. Jonathan Aitken served a seven month prison sentence for perjury in a civil case, and because of Charles Colson's ministry to him in that time, he became a Christian. The fact that Aitken is a Christian shows clearly in the latter part of the book, as I doubt any secular author could speak so readily of the work of the Holy Spirit and the life of faith without condescension. It is also clear that he is not an American Christian, as he can objectively describe the American Christian community, describing its various factions without the bias you'd expect from someone who was a part of it. He does have a narrower definition of what counts as an evangelical than I do, but while I would have disagreed with him over some of the technicalities of the movement, I do appreciate the outsider's view he brings to it.

One thing about Aitken's writing that I found annoying was that he straddled the line between a chronological and thematic ordering of the story. He would often take a theme, such as Prison Fellowship's growth in its early years, and follow it for a certain time, then go to another theme, rewinding a couple of years to explain Colson's growing interest in theology, and follow that. After touching a few more themes, he would come back to Prison Fellowship and later developments. This made it difficult to sort out when events took place, and which events were concurrent, which came before, and which came after. Occassionally Aitken would make the attempt to tie significant events together, pointing out that Colson's study of theology had encouraged him to begin a ministry teaching Christian Worldview issues, but the jumping around m